waQaar-aHmad-malik
mehmaan
Number of posts : 21
Registration date : 2007-11-08
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Khalid Mahmood
muntaZim
Number of posts : 81
Age : 73
Location : Mississauga, Canada.
Registration date : 2007-10-26
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waQaar-aHmad-malik
mehmaan
Number of posts : 21
Registration date : 2007-11-08
| Subject: Re: aik She'r : "aati haiN jaib say woh khawaateeN khaYaal  Tue Dec 04, 2007 11:33 pm | |
| khaalid SaaHeb,
aap aik dam GhaaYab ho gaye haiN? sab kheriYat to hay! naZ^ar aaye to Sirf is meHfil maiN. | |
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Khalid Mahmood
muntaZim
Number of posts : 81
Age : 73
Location : Mississauga, Canada.
Registration date : 2007-10-26
| | Subject: Re: aik She'r : "aati haiN jaib say woh khawaateeN khaYaal Wed Dec 05, 2007 12:53 am | |
| - waQaar-aHmad-malik wrote:
- khaalid SaaHeb,
aap aik dam GhaaYab ho gaye haiN? sab kheriYat to hay! naZ^ar aaye to Sirf is meHfil maiN. janaab maiN aajkal mulk ki bazaahir "sab achha hai", aur ba baatin kuch theek nahiN, waali soorat e haal se intehaii ranjeeda hooN. yahaN tak k kuch keh nahiN paa raha. shayad do chaar qetaat hi kahey hoN ge.
maiN bilkul khairiyat se hooN, sochna aur dimaagh ka maaoof ho jaana iska saboot haiN. | |
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miim miim mughal
muntaZim-e-a'A'laa
Number of posts : 140
Age : 44
Location : North Nazimabad, Karachi
Registration date : 2007-10-24
| | Subject: Re: aik She'r : "aati haiN jaib say woh khawaateeN khaYaal Wed Dec 05, 2007 4:36 pm | |
| - waQaar-aHmad-malik wrote:
- aadaab!
aik misr'ah Ghaalib ka paRh~tay huay Yeh She'r ho gaYa th~aa. aapki bazm ki naZr.
"aatay haiN ghaib say Yeh maZaameeN khaYaal maiN"
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"aati haiN jaib say woh khawaateeN khaYaal maiN
baazaar jaayeN jo, to ho Shohar wabaal maiN"
Chacha Ghaalib ki ruuH say ma'zirat kay saath~, waQaar  کیا کہنے وقار صاحب
خوب درگت بنائی ہے چچا جان کے مصرعے کی۔۔۔
اور ہاں آپ نے چچاکی روح سے معذرت کی انہوں نے ایک شرط کے ساتھ قبول کرنے کا عندیہ دیا ہے۔۔ وہ یہ کہ اب آپ ان کے اسی مصرعے میں دو سنجیدہ شعر بھی کہہ کر ارسال کریں۔۔۔
فقط آپ کا عم زاد
مجاورِ مزارِ غالب
م۔م۔مغل
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waQaar-aHmad-malik
mehmaan
Number of posts : 21
Registration date : 2007-11-08
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