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PostSubject: ghazal   Sun Dec 02, 2007 3:28 am

Adaab,

pehlee baar iss mehfil meN apni aik ghazal le kar haazir ho rahi hooN. ummeed hai ke dostoN ko paaNd aaye gee. naa bhee aaye tau apnee raa'e se zaroor aagaaH kijiye gaa.

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PostSubject: Re: ghazal   Sun Dec 02, 2007 9:22 pm

naaheed SaaHebah,

aadaab!

aapki ghazal paRh~ii aur pasand aa,ii. ghazal ka doosra She'r jiska mirs'ah hay "koii roShan sitaarah raat ko day", merii samajh~ maiN nahiiN aaYa. aap batlaayeN!

ghazal per daad qubool kee jiYay meri.

likh~ti rahYay!

waQaar Smile
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PostSubject: Re: ghazal   Tue Dec 04, 2007 8:03 pm



dhund se ab nikaal suraj ko
sabz rangat bhi zard paat ko de


Naheed Virk
Sahiba,

Adaab!

sab se pehlay tau Sukhan dostaaN maiN khush aamdeed....

rahi baat ghazal ki tau janaab aap ki ghazal bohat khoob hay, achhi lagi, khas ker quoted she'r....

bohat sari daad haazir hay.... gar qabool uftad zahay izzo sharaf.....

Mukhlis,
Muhammad Ahmed.
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PostSubject: Re: ghazal   Thu Dec 06, 2007 3:07 pm

Dafan ker ke marey huey sab pal
zinda lamhey bhi meri zaat ko dey

Bohat khubsoorat ghazal kahi aap ney Naheed. Khas ker ye sher bohat acha laga.

Daad Hazir hey

Kher andesh

Qamar uz Zaman
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PostSubject: Re: ghazal   Sun Dec 09, 2007 12:05 am

waQaar-aHmad-malik wrote:
naaheed SaaHebah,

aadaab!

aapki ghazal paRh~ii aur pasand aa,ii. ghazal ka doosra She'r jiska mirs'ah hay "koii roShan sitaarah raat ko day", merii samajh~ maiN nahiiN aaYa. aap batlaayeN!

ghazal per daad qubool kee jiYay meri.

likh~ti rahYay!

waQaar Smile

Aadaab Waqaar saaheb,

ghazal kee pasaNdeedagee ke liye buhat shukriya!

aap ne dusrey she'r

khol kar apnee aaNkh kee khiRkee
koyee roshan sitaarah raat ko de

kee wazaahat maaNgee hai tau yahaaN sirf itnaa hi kehnaa maqsood hai ke aankhoN meN roshani hi roshani hai yooN jaisey sitaare waheeN baseraa kar rahe hoN aur raat chooNke andheri hoti hai iss liye andheri raat ko roshan karne kee iltijaa hai ke apnee aankHoN meN mojood sitaaroN kee roshani meN se raat ko bhee aikroshani dau.

Umeed karti hooN ke ibhaam door ho geyaa ho gaa.

shukriya
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PostSubject: Re: ghazal   Sun Dec 09, 2007 12:07 am

Muhammad Ahmed wrote:


dhund se ab nikaal suraj ko
sabz rangat bhi zard paat ko de


Naheed Virk
Sahiba,

Adaab!

sab se pehlay tau Sukhan dostaaN maiN khush aamdeed....

rahi baat ghazal ki tau janaab aap ki ghazal bohat khoob hay, achhi lagi, khas ker quoted she'r....

bohat sari daad haazir hay.... gar qabool uftad zahay izzo sharaf.....

Mukhlis,
Muhammad Ahmed.

aadaab janaab Muhammad Ahmed saaheb,

aap ne ghazal ko pasaNd kiyaa aur behad saraahaa tau iss ke liye maiN aap kee buhat mamnoon hooN.

buhat shukriya
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PostSubject: Re: ghazal   Sun Dec 09, 2007 12:10 am

zehrab wrote:
Dafan ker ke marey huey sab pal
zinda lamhey bhi meri zaat ko dey

Bohat khubsoorat ghazal kahi aap ney Naheed. Khas ker ye sher bohat acha laga.

Daad Hazir hey

Kher andesh

Qamar uz Zaman

Qamar saaheb,

aap ne meree ghazal ko pasaNd kiyaa, iss ke liye buhat shukriya!

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