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PostSubject: Aik Puraani Ghazal   Sun Nov 04, 2007 2:39 am

HaaZreen e meHfil aadaab.


mujhe Khushi hai keh mere bhaii m.m.muGhal neh mujhe is bazm keh qaabil samjha aur mujhe is bazm maiN apna kalaam pesh karney kii daawat dii. (Shukriyah MuGhal). maiN is bazm maiN apni ibtidaa apnii shaaiiri keh ibtedaaii do~ur (1997) kii Ghazal keh chand ashaar say kar raha hoN.



harjaayee say darr lagtaa hai
ruswaayee say dar lagtaa hai

in aaNkhoN nay wo kuch dekha
beenaayee say dar lagtaa hai

fikr nay aisee aaNkheN diiN haiN
gehraayee say darr lagtaa hai

tumse maraasim kaise baRhalo0N
tanhaayee say darr lagtaa hai

ab maiN khuaab nahiN dekhooNga
such~chayee say dar lagtaa hai



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PostSubject: Re: Aik Puraani Ghazal   Mon Nov 05, 2007 8:44 pm

Sameer Bhaii
Adaab!

ghazal ke char she'r aap ne pesh kiay, aur bohat khoob kiay, itni saada behar maiN aap ne bohat khoob she'r kahay haiN.... khas ker aakhri she'r bohat pasand aaya....

daad haazir-e-khidmat hay...., qabool kijay,

Mukhlis,
Muhammad Ahmed.
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PostSubject: Re: Aik Puraani Ghazal   Mon Nov 05, 2007 11:24 pm

Muhammad Ahmed wrote:
Sameer Bhaii
Adaab!

ghazal ke char she'r aap ne pesh kiay, aur bohat khoob kiay, itni saada behar maiN aap ne bohat khoob she'r kahay haiN.... khas ker aakhri she'r bohat pasand aaya....

daad haazir-e-khidmat hay...., qabool kijay,

Mukhlis,
Muhammad Ahmed.


Muhammad Ahmed bhaii
aadaab o salaam e masnoon


Ghazal kii pasandidgii keh liye bohat bohat shukriyah aur saath hi saath aap say guzaarish hai keh jald apney taazah kalaam say humey taazah dam kijiye "pyaara pyaara pakistan available" keh baad aap market say ghayab haiN. Smile


aapka bhaaii

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PostSubject: Re: Aik Puraani Ghazal   Mon Nov 12, 2007 8:24 pm

Sameer SaaHeb,

aSsalaam, aadaab!

der say aamad kay liYay ma'zirat. maaShaa,Allaah aapko to kaafi saal ho gaye haiN Shaa'irii maiN aaye. 1997 kay lehaaz say bh~ii aik aCHh~ii ghazal. daad qubool kee jiYay!

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PostSubject: Re: Aik Puraani Ghazal   Mon Nov 12, 2007 8:38 pm

buha Khoo samiir .
kiyaa kehnay haiN..

:: tumse maraasim kaise baRhalo0N
tanhaayee say darr lagtaa hai

waah jiitay rahau bha'yaa..
dil Khush kardiya hay tum nay ..


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PostSubject: Re: Aik Puraani Ghazal   Fri Nov 16, 2007 2:54 am

waQaar-aHmad-malik wrote:
Sameer SaaHeb,

aSsalaam, aadaab!

der say aamad kay liYay ma'zirat. maaShaa,Allaah aapko to kaafi saal ho gaye haiN Shaa'irii maiN aaye. 1997 kay lehaaz say bh~ii aik aCHh~ii ghazal. daad qubool kee jiYay!

waQaar Smile


moHtaram waQaar SaaHib
aadaab.

itni puraani Ghazal per bhii aap neh meri HoSlaa afzaaii kii is keh liye mamnoon hoN.


Tifl e maktab

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PostSubject: Re: Aik Puraani Ghazal   Fri Nov 16, 2007 3:01 am

miim miim mughal wrote:
buha Khoo samiir .
kiyaa kehnay haiN..

:: tumse maraasim kaise baRhalo0N
tanhaayee say darr lagtaa hai

waah jiitay rahau bha'yaa..
dil Khush kardiya hay tum nay ..


Mughal


bhaaii Mughal


HoSlaa afzaaii keh liye shukriyah.

tumaraa bhaaii

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PostSubject: Re: Aik Puraani Ghazal   Sat Nov 17, 2007 12:38 pm

samiir .
kiyaa kehnay haiN..

:: tumse maraasim kaise baRhalo0N
tanhaayee say darr lagtaa hai


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PostSubject: Re: Aik Puraani Ghazal   Sat Nov 24, 2007 5:42 am

yasmin feroz wrote:
samiir .
kiyaa kehnay haiN..

:: tumse maraasim kaise baRhalo0N
tanhaayee say darr lagtaa hai


YASMIN


moHtarmah Yasmin SaaHibah
aadaab.


meri puraani aur adnaa sii kaavish per aap ki hoSlaa afzaaii kaa bohat bohat shukriyah.

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PostSubject: Re: Aik Puraani Ghazal   Fri Nov 30, 2007 5:32 am

moHtaram janaab Sameer SaaHib, aadaab !

yeh mere liye aek i'zaaz hai k maiN aap jiase suKhanvar hastiyoN ke darmayaan maujood hooN aur aap se ham-kalaam hooN ! Smile aap ki Ghazal bahut u'mdah hai ! sabhii ash'aar pasand aaye KhaaS taur par :

"tumse maraasim kaise baRhalo0N
tanhaayee say darr lagtaa hai "

yeh she'r to bahut hi pasand aayaa ! daad aur mubaarakbaad qablool kejiye ! shukriya

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PostSubject: Re: Aik Puraani Ghazal   Sun Dec 02, 2007 1:38 am

Zia Baloch wrote:
moHtaram janaab Sameer SaaHib, aadaab !

yeh mere liye aek i'zaaz hai k maiN aap jiase suKhanvar hastiyoN ke darmayaan maujood hooN aur aap se ham-kalaam hooN ! Smile aap ki Ghazal bahut u'mdah hai ! sabhii ash'aar pasand aaye KhaaS taur par :

"tumse maraasim kaise baRhalo0N
tanhaayee say darr lagtaa hai "

yeh she'r to bahut hi pasand aayaa ! daad aur mubaarakbaad qablool kejiye ! shukriya

Zia Baloch


HoaSlaa afzaa`ii kay liye bayHad mamnoon hoN. shukriyah

aapka bhaaii

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PostSubject: Re: Aik Puraani Ghazal   Tue Dec 25, 2007 3:08 pm

in aaNkhoN nay wo kuch dekha
beenaayee say dar lagtaa hai

wah sameer saheb. Bohat khub. Sari ghazal hi khub hey lekin is sher ney bohat saroor diya.

Daad qabool ki jiye.

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PostSubject: Re: Aik Puraani Ghazal   Tue Dec 25, 2007 5:06 pm

in aaNkhoN nay wo kuch dekha
beenaayee say dar lagtaa hai

wah sameer saheb. Bohat khub. Sari ghazal hi khub hey lekin is sher ney bohat saroor diya.

Daad qabool ki jiye.


aadaab


Qamar SaaHib yeh sub aapka Husn e naZar hai aur kuch bhi nahi.

badah Ghazal kii pasandiidgi aur daad per aapka mutashakkir hai.


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