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+4sameer l.a.asim Muhammad Ahmed miim miim mughal 8 posters |
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miim miim mughal
muntaZim-e-a'A'laa
Number of posts : 140
Age : 44
Location : North Nazimabad, Karachi
Registration date : 2007-10-24
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Muhammad Ahmed
muntaZim
Number of posts : 43
Registration date : 2007-10-24
| Subject: Re: ~~ chaar Harf / chaar miSr'A'ay ~~  Tue Oct 30, 2007 6:14 pm | |
| Muhgal Bhaii
Adaab!
Ye yaqeenan wohi chaar misray haiN jo aap ne sunaaye thay.
Bohat khoob kaha hay aap ne.... lajawaab hay bhaiii..... meri jaanib se daad qabool kijay....
kya puuri ghazal honay ka imkaan hay... ?
Mukhlis,
Muhammad Ahmed. | |
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miim miim mughal
muntaZim-e-a'A'laa
Number of posts : 140
Age : 44
Location : North Nazimabad, Karachi
Registration date : 2007-10-24
| | Subject: Re: ~~ chaar Harf / chaar miSr'A'ay ~~ Tue Oct 30, 2007 6:15 pm | |
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l.a.asim
Sadr " suKhan daustaaN
Number of posts : 5
Registration date : 2007-10-25
| | Subject: Re: ~~ chaar Harf / chaar miSr'A'ay ~~ Wed Oct 31, 2007 1:20 am | |
| Pyare Mughal
khush raho
sune hue ash'aar paRhe,phir daad qabool karo lekin apni khayal aaraii se Dare huoN ko Daraya na karo agar ham mar gae tau log kaheNge ek shair daad aur bedaad ke darmiyan meiN aakar mahfil se uTh gaya,khuda hameN aur hamare mulk ko salamat rakkhe aur zalimoN se nijaat ata kare aameen.
ek baat aur ,chaar harf ''laa'nat'' ke liye ziyada iste'maal hota hai,
chaar harf bhejna muhaavra hai yani laa'nat bhejna yani nazar andaaz karna aur desh pe marna,aur ........khair jane do.
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sameer
rukn-e-majlis-e-shooraa
Number of posts : 35
Location : Keamari Karachi
Registration date : 2007-10-30
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Khalid Mahmood
muntaZim
Number of posts : 81
Age : 73
Location : Mississauga, Canada.
Registration date : 2007-10-26
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phototech81
mehmaan
Number of posts : 21
Registration date : 2007-11-10
| | Subject: Re: ~~ chaar Harf / chaar miSr'A'ay ~~ Thu Nov 15, 2007 5:56 pm | |
| bohat khub janab
bohat achy mesry lekh hai aap ny
boaht khub aap ki aur poetry ka intazar rahy ga | |
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Zia Baloch
rukn-e-E'zaazii
Number of posts : 13
Age : 43
Location : Balochistan
Registration date : 2007-10-27
| | Subject: Re: ~~ chaar Harf / chaar miSr'A'ay ~~ Fri Nov 30, 2007 5:08 am | |
| vaah MuGhal vaah ! mazaa aagayaa !
mujhe hamesha se shaai'ree meiN yeh andaaz marGhoob rahaa hai ! aap ne to meri chaaNdnii karaadii ! bahut hii Khoob ! ab jaldii se Ghazal mukammal kejiye ! aur hameN sunaaiye ! ham muntazir haiN ! ziyaada intezaar maut ke mutaraadif hai ! Khayaal rakhiye gaa ! be-shumaar daad qabool farmaaiye ! shukriya
Zia Baloch | |
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zehrab
mehmaan
Number of posts : 20
Location : USA
Registration date : 2007-12-06
| | Subject: Re: ~~ chaar Harf / chaar miSr'A'ay ~~ Fri Dec 14, 2007 4:15 pm | |
| Mughal Bhai
aap ka kalam watan ke her samajh dar shakhs ke dil ki awaz hey. Lekin wahan tow haal wohi hey na ke:
ab hey baari bisaartoN ki qamar
Kho chukey log tow zubaN kab ke
Aur kisi qaum ki sab sey baree bad naseebi wo hoti hey jab wahan ke danish war apni awaz aur tehreer sey mehroom ho jaaen ya ker diye jaaen .
Umeed hey jald hi aap is ghazal ki takmeel fermaaen gey. isi andaz ka mera ek sher berdasht ki jiye:
GaliyoN mein guunjti hey talabgar ki sada
azad ho gayee hey griftar ki sada
kabhi moqa mila tow puui ghazal bhi suniye ga.
Bohat si daad
Qamar | |
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bahar haal ho sakta hai k aap ne is bezm meiN aisa koii intezaam ker rakha ho. ager aisa hai to kuch ata pata btaiiye!