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Jawaid Badauni
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PostSubject: Meri TaraHee Ghazal Mushairah Urdubandhan (Decmber)   Fri Dec 07, 2007 5:14 am

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PostSubject: Re: Meri TaraHee Ghazal Mushairah Urdubandhan (Decmber)   Fri Dec 07, 2007 7:48 pm

aaadaab jaavid saaHib
kiyaa kehnay Ghazal buhat hii Khoob hay..
merii naachiiz daad aur du'aaiN qubool kiijiay.
sunny king flower
aik baat ke'h:

tesry sh'er or maqT' maiN imlaa kii GhalaTii reh ga'ee hay usay drust karvaa liijiay.

niyaaz mashrab.
miim miim mughal

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PostSubject: Re: Meri TaraHee Ghazal Mushairah Urdubandhan (Decmber)   Sat Dec 08, 2007 12:40 am

miim miim mughal wrote:
aaadaab jaavid saaHib
kiyaa kehnay Ghazal buhat hii Khoob hay..
merii naachiiz daad aur du'aaiN qubool kiijiay.
sunny king flower
aik baat ke'h:

tesry sh'er or maqT' maiN imlaa kii GhalaTii reh ga'ee hay usay drust karvaa liijiay.

niyaaz mashrab.
miim miim mughal


Azeezam Meem Meem MuGhal Sahab, tasleemaat

Ghazal ki pazeeraayee ke liye marhoon.e minnat hooN.

Beshak teesre sher meN "ek" aur maqtAy meN "mira" alfaz hona chaahiye. Ek MoHtarma ne bohat KhulooS se yeh KhuBSurat image banaya hai. Mujh se 'check" bhi karwaya tha shayad maiN hi ujlat meN nahiN pakaR saka.

Guzarish hai keh aap in alfaaz ko inki saheeh Surat men paRh lijiyega.

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PostSubject: Re: Meri TaraHee Ghazal Mushairah Urdubandhan (Decmber)   Sat Dec 08, 2007 1:24 am

Jawaid Badauni wrote:


uThaa kay lay gaya saara anaaj saahokar
kisaan bhooka tarasta hai daaney daaney ko

badaltey chehray pe unkay nigah thi mairi
badal badal kay sunaana paRa fasaaney ko



Sub say pehley toh meHfil maiN Khush Aamdeed.....

khoob Ghazal kahi hai aap ney daad HaaZir hai Qabool kijye.


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PostSubject: Re: Meri TaraHee Ghazal Mushairah Urdubandhan (Decmber)   Mon Dec 17, 2007 1:33 am

sameer wrote:
Jawaid Badauni wrote:


uThaa kay lay gaya saara anaaj saahokar
kisaan bhooka tarasta hai daaney daaney ko

badaltey chehray pe unkay nigah thi mairi
badal badal kay sunaana paRa fasaaney ko



Sub say pehley toh meHfil maiN Khush Aamdeed.....

khoob Ghazal kahi hai aap ney daad HaaZir hai Qabool kijye.


SAMEER



Mohatrmee Sameer Saahab,
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Mehfil meN mujhe KhusaAmdeed kahne ke liye shukriya. Ghazal kipazeeraayee ke liye bhee aap ka behud mamnoon hooN.

Aapke paiGham ka jawab dene meN kuch taaKheer huuwi jiske liye maAzrat Khuwaah hooN.

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PostSubject: Re: Meri TaraHee Ghazal Mushairah Urdubandhan (Decmber)   Tue Dec 18, 2007 4:14 pm

uThaa kay lay gaya saara anaaj saahokar
kisaan bhooka tarasta hai daaney daaney ko

badaltey chehray pe unkay nigah thi mairi
badal badal kay sunaana paRa fasaaney ko

raha na wo ke usay bhi zameeN, nigal hi gaee
wo jau uTha tha jahaaN khaak maiN milaanay ko




Mohtaram Javaid Bhai,
adaaab!

aap ki ghazal paRhnay ka sharf haasil hua, aur janaab aap ki ghazal khoob lagi, bohat umda aur bohat hi dil-pazeer khas ker darj baala teen ash'aar....

wah janaab, wah...

meri jaanib se bharpur daad haazir hay, qabool kijay....

Mukhlis,
Muhammad Ahmed.
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PostSubject: Re: Meri TaraHee Ghazal Mushairah Urdubandhan (Decmber)   Tue Dec 18, 2007 9:01 pm

Muhammad Ahmed wrote:
uThaa kay lay gaya saara anaaj saahokar
kisaan bhooka tarasta hai daaney daaney ko

badaltey chehray pe unkay nigah thi mairi
badal badal kay sunaana paRa fasaaney ko

raha na wo ke usay bhi zameeN, nigal hi gaee
wo jau uTha tha jahaaN khaak maiN milaanay ko




Mohtaram Javaid Bhai,
adaaab!

aap ki ghazal paRhnay ka sharf haasil hua, aur janaab aap ki ghazal khoob lagi, bohat umda aur bohat hi dil-pazeer khas ker darj baala teen ash'aar....

wah janaab, wah...

meri jaanib se bharpur daad haazir hay, qabool kijay....

Mukhlis,
Muhammad Ahmed.



Azeezi Muhammad Ahmed Saahab
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Aap ne ji KhulooS se ghazal ki pazeeraayee ki hai mujhe bohat achcha laga aur mere himmat afzaaii bhee huuwee. Bohat bohat shukriya.

Ummid hai aaindah bhi mulaqaat hoti rahegee.

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PostSubject: Re: Meri TaraHee Ghazal Mushairah Urdubandhan (Decmber)   Tue Dec 25, 2007 3:20 pm

Bhai Javed Saheb:

Aap ki ghazal parhi aur bas dekhta hi reh gaya. Ab itney barey sukhanwar is per daad ke phool bersa chukey hein tow ham ghareeb kya kahen is ka haq ada kerney ko. Itni umda ghazal per bherpoor daad qabool ki jiye saheb.

Kher andesh

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