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naheedv mehmaan
Number of posts : 10 Registration date : 2007-11-29
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waQaar-aHmad-malik mehmaan
Number of posts : 21 Registration date : 2007-11-08
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Muhammad Ahmed muntaZim
Number of posts : 43 Registration date : 2007-10-24
| Subject: Re: ghazal Tue Dec 04, 2007 8:03 pm | |
| dhund se ab nikaal suraj ko sabz rangat bhi zard paat ko de Naheed Virk Sahiba,
Adaab!
sab se pehlay tau Sukhan dostaaN maiN khush aamdeed....
rahi baat ghazal ki tau janaab aap ki ghazal bohat khoob hay, achhi lagi, khas ker quoted she'r....
bohat sari daad haazir hay.... gar qabool uftad zahay izzo sharaf.....
Mukhlis, Muhammad Ahmed. | |
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zehrab mehmaan
Number of posts : 20 Location : USA Registration date : 2007-12-06
| Subject: Re: ghazal Thu Dec 06, 2007 3:07 pm | |
| Dafan ker ke marey huey sab pal zinda lamhey bhi meri zaat ko dey
Bohat khubsoorat ghazal kahi aap ney Naheed. Khas ker ye sher bohat acha laga.
Daad Hazir hey
Kher andesh
Qamar uz Zaman | |
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naheedv mehmaan
Number of posts : 10 Registration date : 2007-11-29
| Subject: Re: ghazal Sun Dec 09, 2007 12:05 am | |
| - waQaar-aHmad-malik wrote:
- naaheed SaaHebah,
aadaab!
aapki ghazal paRh~ii aur pasand aa,ii. ghazal ka doosra She'r jiska mirs'ah hay "koii roShan sitaarah raat ko day", merii samajh~ maiN nahiiN aaYa. aap batlaayeN!
ghazal per daad qubool kee jiYay meri.
likh~ti rahYay!
waQaar Aadaab Waqaar saaheb, ghazal kee pasaNdeedagee ke liye buhat shukriya! aap ne dusrey she'r khol kar apnee aaNkh kee khiRkee koyee roshan sitaarah raat ko de kee wazaahat maaNgee hai tau yahaaN sirf itnaa hi kehnaa maqsood hai ke aankhoN meN roshani hi roshani hai yooN jaisey sitaare waheeN baseraa kar rahe hoN aur raat chooNke andheri hoti hai iss liye andheri raat ko roshan karne kee iltijaa hai ke apnee aankHoN meN mojood sitaaroN kee roshani meN se raat ko bhee aikroshani dau. Umeed karti hooN ke ibhaam door ho geyaa ho gaa. shukriya Naheed | |
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naheedv mehmaan
Number of posts : 10 Registration date : 2007-11-29
| Subject: Re: ghazal Sun Dec 09, 2007 12:07 am | |
| - Muhammad Ahmed wrote:
dhund se ab nikaal suraj ko sabz rangat bhi zard paat ko de
Naheed Virk Sahiba,
Adaab!
sab se pehlay tau Sukhan dostaaN maiN khush aamdeed....
rahi baat ghazal ki tau janaab aap ki ghazal bohat khoob hay, achhi lagi, khas ker quoted she'r....
bohat sari daad haazir hay.... gar qabool uftad zahay izzo sharaf.....
Mukhlis, Muhammad Ahmed. aadaab janaab Muhammad Ahmed saaheb, aap ne ghazal ko pasaNd kiyaa aur behad saraahaa tau iss ke liye maiN aap kee buhat mamnoon hooN. buhat shukriya Naheed | |
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naheedv mehmaan
Number of posts : 10 Registration date : 2007-11-29
| Subject: Re: ghazal Sun Dec 09, 2007 12:10 am | |
| - zehrab wrote:
- Dafan ker ke marey huey sab pal
zinda lamhey bhi meri zaat ko dey
Bohat khubsoorat ghazal kahi aap ney Naheed. Khas ker ye sher bohat acha laga.
Daad Hazir hey
Kher andesh
Qamar uz Zaman Qamar saaheb, aap ne meree ghazal ko pasaNd kiyaa, iss ke liye buhat shukriya! mukhliS Naheed | |
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