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sameer rukn-e-majlis-e-shooraa
Number of posts : 35 Location : Keamari Karachi Registration date : 2007-10-30
| Subject: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN Sun Dec 02, 2007 1:42 am | |
| HaaZreen e mehfilaadaab.
aik aur kaavish is ummeed kay saath keh aap apni aaraa say mehroom har giz nahi kareNgey. shukriyah.
roaz yeh khaab dekhtaa hoN maiN apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN
bin tere bhi toh naGhma khuwaN hai hayaat bin tere bhi toh jee rahaa hoN maiN
wo toh bas yuNhi yaad kartaa hoN warnah tumko bhula chuka hoN maiN
koan samjhey merey taGhayyur ko waQt hoN aur aainah hoN maiN
Khud pe abtak nahiN khulaa hoN phir tujh say kaisay kahoN kay kya hoN maiN
kheltaa hoN kayee hawaadis say ranj kay saaye maiN palaa hoN maiN
tiiragi say toh Khair nafrat hai roashni say bhi laR raha hoN maiN
ab mujhey kyuN sada~eN detay ho? kya bohat door jaa chukaa hoN maiN?
mujhko dukh hai kay aaj kal Khud ko teri naZroN say dekhtaa hoN maiN
woh jo pehloo maiN roaz rehta hai uus say ab tak nahi milaa hoN maiN
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waQaar-aHmad-malik mehmaan
Number of posts : 21 Registration date : 2007-11-08
| Subject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN Sun Dec 02, 2007 9:05 pm | |
| janaab Sameer SaaHeb, Aadaab! kaisay haiN aap? aik bahut hii saadah aur aCHh~ii ghazal kahii hay aapnay. maqt^'ah to bay-micaal hay SaaHeb. woh jo pehloo maiN roaz rehta hai uus say ab tak nahi milaa hoN maiNvaah! merii dilii daad haaZir hay,qubool kee jiYay! waQaar | |
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sameer rukn-e-majlis-e-shooraa
Number of posts : 35 Location : Keamari Karachi Registration date : 2007-10-30
| Subject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN Mon Dec 03, 2007 10:11 pm | |
| [quote="waQaar-aHmad-malik"]janaab Sameer SaaHeb, Aadaab! kaisay haiN aap? aik bahut hii saadah aur aCHh~ii ghazal kahii hay aapnay. maqt^'ah to bay-micaal hay SaaHeb. woh jo pehloo maiN roaz rehta hai uus say ab tak nahi milaa hoN maiNvaah! Waqar bhaaii aadaabALHUMDULILLAH Bilkul theek hoN aur aapkii taazah Ghazal kaa intezaar kar raha hoN .Ghazal kii pasandiidagi aur HoSlaa afzaaii kay liye bayHad mamnoon hoN.SAMEER | |
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zehrab mehmaan
Number of posts : 20 Location : USA Registration date : 2007-12-06
| Subject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN Sun Dec 09, 2007 5:08 pm | |
| Sameer Saheb:
Bohat khubsoorat ghazal kahi aap ney. Khas taur per ye sher:
wo toh bas yuNhi yaad kartaa hoN warnah tumko bhula chuka hoN maiN
wah wah. Kya bey niazi hey.
aur ye sher:
ab mujhey kyuN sada~eN detay ho? kya bohat door jaa chukaa hoN maiN?
Bohat khub
aur aap ke maqta per tow mujhey apna ek sher yad aa gaya:
Aks jis ka hey saja dil ke sanam khaaney mein Mein ney us shakhs ko dekha bhi naheeN tha shayad.
Dher sari daad hazir hey.
Kher andesh
Qamar | |
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yasmin feroz mehmaan
Number of posts : 20 Registration date : 2007-11-04
| Subject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN Fri Dec 14, 2007 11:35 pm | |
| wah! samir sahib mujhko dukh hai kay aaj kal khud ko tari nazron say dekhtaa hon mein bohat khoob yasmin : | |
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sameer rukn-e-majlis-e-shooraa
Number of posts : 35 Location : Keamari Karachi Registration date : 2007-10-30
| Subject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN Sat Dec 15, 2007 1:01 am | |
| - zehrab wrote:
- Sameer Saheb:
Bohat khubsoorat ghazal kahi aap ney. Khas taur per ye sher:
wo toh bas yuNhi yaad kartaa hoN warnah tumko bhula chuka hoN maiN
wah wah. Kya bey niazi hey.
aur ye sher:
ab mujhey kyuN sada~eN detay ho? kya bohat door jaa chukaa hoN maiN?
Bohat khub
aur aap ke maqta per tow mujhey apna ek sher yad aa gaya:
Aks jis ka hey saja dil ke sanam khaaney mein Mein ney us shakhs ko dekha bhi naheeN tha shayad.
Dher sari daad hazir hey.
Kher andesh
Qamar janaab Qamar Zaman SaaHib. aadaab. yeh sub aapka huSn e naZar hai kay aapney meray kalaam ko is qaabil samjha, Ghazal kii pasandiidgi kay liye bohat shukriyah. lekin aik request bhi hai.....woh yeh keh maire maqta per jo aap ney apna shair sunaya hai uskii poori Ghazal send kar dijiye dar aSl maiN is zameen maiN janaab IftiKhaar Aarif SaaHib kii Ghazal paRh chuka hoN Ishq kaisa kay bharosa bhi nahi tha shaayed uss say mera koi rishtaa bhi nahi tha shayed. Iftekhar Arif aur yeh ghazal bhi mujhey pasand aaii thi aur haN agar bura nah maaney to wo shair bhi jo aap ney zia bhaaii kay kalaam per refference kay tour per paish kiya hai Her samt nazar ja ke palat aati hey heraN is shehr ko itna kabhi weeraN naheeN dekha. mujhe intezaar rahey gaa. ummeed hai kay aap mayoos nahi kareiNge. shukriyah aapka bhaaii SAMEER | |
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sameer rukn-e-majlis-e-shooraa
Number of posts : 35 Location : Keamari Karachi Registration date : 2007-10-30
| Subject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN Sun Dec 16, 2007 3:47 pm | |
| - yasmin feroz wrote:
- wah! samir sahib
mujhko dukh hai kay aaj kal khud ko tari nazron say dekhtaa hon mein bohat khoob yasmin : mamnoon e karam SAMEER | |
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sameer rukn-e-majlis-e-shooraa
Number of posts : 35 Location : Keamari Karachi Registration date : 2007-10-30
| Subject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN Thu Dec 20, 2007 2:52 am | |
| - yasmin feroz wrote:
- wah! samir sahib
mujhko dukh hai kay aaj kal khud ko tari nazron say dekhtaa hon mein bohat khoob yasmin : aadaab. mamnoon e karam SAMEER | |
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Bheegi-Palkain mehmaan
Number of posts : 7 Registration date : 2008-01-10
| Subject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN Sun Jan 13, 2008 6:45 am | |
| Assalam_O_Alikum WR WB Sir Sameer bhot umda mujhy A to Z bus wah wah hi karta rah gya FeamnAllah | |
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Khalid Mahmood muntaZim
Number of posts : 81 Age : 73 Location : Mississauga, Canada. Registration date : 2007-10-26
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sameer rukn-e-majlis-e-shooraa
Number of posts : 35 Location : Keamari Karachi Registration date : 2007-10-30
| Subject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN Sat Jan 19, 2008 5:43 am | |
| - Bheegi-Palkain wrote:
- Assalam_O_Alikum WR WB
Sir Sameer bhot umda mujhy A to Z bus wah wah hi karta rah gya
FeamnAllah aadaab. aapki HoSlaa afzaaii kaa bohat bohat shukriyah. aaindha bhi is Tifl e maktab ko apni aaraa say nawaaztey rahiye gaa. SAMEER | |
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sameer rukn-e-majlis-e-shooraa
Number of posts : 35 Location : Keamari Karachi Registration date : 2007-10-30
| Subject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN Sat Jan 19, 2008 5:46 am | |
| - Khalid Mahmood wrote:
- waah ji waah!!!
sameer sb deir sey aaney per maazrat, aur dhieroN daad qubool keeje! mujhe bhi haasil e ghazal aakhri she'r bohot pasand aaya!
dua go khaalid moHtaram Khalid mahmood SaaHib. aadaab o salaam e masnoon. aapkii daad say Khaaksaar ki HoSlaa afzaaii hoti hai, Allah mujhey aap kay dast e shafqat say kabhi mahroom nah karey. Aameen. SAMEER | |
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sham rukn-e-majlis-e-shooraa
Number of posts : 4 Registration date : 2007-10-25
| Subject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN Thu Feb 21, 2008 11:43 am | |
| Sameer ,
aik bahut hii aCHh~ii ghazal kahii hay aapnay. vaah!
merii daad haaZir hay
Ehtesham Anwar | |
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sameer rukn-e-majlis-e-shooraa
Number of posts : 35 Location : Keamari Karachi Registration date : 2007-10-30
| Subject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN Thu Feb 28, 2008 11:32 pm | |
| - sham wrote:
- Sameer ,
aik bahut hii aCHh~ii ghazal kahii hay aapnay. vaah!
merii daad haaZir hay
Ehtesham Anwar moHtaram Ehtishaan SaaHib. aadaab. Ghazal kii pasandiidgi kay liye bayHad mamnoon hoN. Sameer | |
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Shabbir Nazish mehmaan
Number of posts : 10 Registration date : 2008-02-11
| Subject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN Thu Oct 01, 2009 9:56 pm | |
| bht achhey sameer!
bht piyari aor bht sundar ghazal kahi hy. bari saadgi aor bari komalta nazar aai.......jari rakho safar.
wo toh bas yuNhi yaad kartaa hoN warnah tumko bhula chuka hoN maiN
koan samjhey merey taGhayyur ko waQt hoN aur aainah hoN maiN
Khair Andaish
Shabbir Nazish | |
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