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PostSubject: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN   Sun Dec 02, 2007 1:42 am

HaaZreen e mehfilaadaab.


aik aur kaavish is ummeed kay saath keh aap apni aaraa say mehroom har giz nahi kareNgey. shukriyah.


roaz yeh khaab dekhtaa hoN maiN
apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN

bin tere bhi toh naGhma khuwaN hai hayaat
bin tere bhi toh jee rahaa hoN maiN

wo toh bas yuNhi yaad kartaa hoN
warnah tumko bhula chuka hoN maiN

koan samjhey merey taGhayyur ko
waQt hoN aur aainah hoN maiN

Khud pe abtak nahiN khulaa hoN phir
tujh say kaisay kahoN kay kya hoN maiN

kheltaa hoN kayee hawaadis say
ranj kay saaye maiN palaa hoN maiN

tiiragi say toh Khair nafrat hai
roashni say bhi laR raha hoN maiN

ab mujhey kyuN sada~eN detay ho?
kya bohat door jaa chukaa hoN maiN?

mujhko dukh hai kay aaj kal Khud ko
teri naZroN say dekhtaa hoN maiN

woh jo pehloo maiN roaz rehta hai
uus say ab tak nahi milaa hoN maiN



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PostSubject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN   Sun Dec 02, 2007 9:05 pm

janaab Sameer SaaHeb,

Aadaab!

kaisay haiN aap?

aik bahut hii saadah aur aCHh~ii ghazal kahii hay aapnay. maqt^'ah to bay-micaal hay SaaHeb.

woh jo pehloo maiN roaz rehta hai
uus say ab tak nahi milaa hoN maiN

vaah!

merii dilii daad haaZir hay,qubool kee jiYay!

waQaar Smile
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PostSubject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN   Mon Dec 03, 2007 10:11 pm

[quote="waQaar-aHmad-malik"]janaab Sameer SaaHeb,

Aadaab!

kaisay haiN aap?

aik bahut hii saadah aur aCHh~ii ghazal kahii hay aapnay. maqt^'ah to bay-micaal hay SaaHeb.

woh jo pehloo maiN roaz rehta hai
uus say ab tak nahi milaa hoN maiN

vaah!




Waqar bhaaii aadaab


ALHUMDULILLAH Bilkul theek hoN aur aapkii taazah Ghazal kaa intezaar kar raha hoN Smile .


Ghazal kii pasandiidagi aur HoSlaa afzaaii kay liye bayHad mamnoon hoN.



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PostSubject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN   Sun Dec 09, 2007 5:08 pm

Sameer Saheb:

Bohat khubsoorat ghazal kahi aap ney. Khas taur per ye sher:

wo toh bas yuNhi yaad kartaa hoN
warnah tumko bhula chuka hoN maiN

wah wah. Kya bey niazi hey.

aur ye sher:

ab mujhey kyuN sada~eN detay ho?
kya bohat door jaa chukaa hoN maiN?

Bohat khub

aur aap ke maqta per tow mujhey apna ek sher yad aa gaya:

Aks jis ka hey saja dil ke sanam khaaney mein
Mein ney us shakhs ko dekha bhi naheeN tha shayad.

Dher sari daad hazir hey.

Kher andesh

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PostSubject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN   Fri Dec 14, 2007 11:35 pm

wah! samir sahib
mujhko dukh hai kay aaj kal khud ko
tari nazron say dekhtaa hon mein
bohat khoob
yasmin :
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PostSubject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN   Sat Dec 15, 2007 1:01 am

zehrab wrote:
Sameer Saheb:

Bohat khubsoorat ghazal kahi aap ney. Khas taur per ye sher:

wo toh bas yuNhi yaad kartaa hoN
warnah tumko bhula chuka hoN maiN

wah wah. Kya bey niazi hey.

aur ye sher:

ab mujhey kyuN sada~eN detay ho?
kya bohat door jaa chukaa hoN maiN?

Bohat khub

aur aap ke maqta per tow mujhey apna ek sher yad aa gaya:

Aks jis ka hey saja dil ke sanam khaaney mein
Mein ney us shakhs ko dekha bhi naheeN tha shayad.

Dher sari daad hazir hey.

Kher andesh

Qamar

janaab Qamar Zaman SaaHib.
aadaab.


yeh sub aapka huSn e naZar hai kay aapney meray kalaam ko is qaabil samjha, Ghazal kii pasandiidgi kay liye bohat shukriyah. lekin aik request bhi hai.....woh yeh keh maire maqta per jo aap ney apna shair sunaya hai uskii poori Ghazal send kar dijiye dar aSl maiN is zameen maiN janaab IftiKhaar Aarif SaaHib kii Ghazal paRh chuka hoN

Ishq kaisa kay bharosa bhi nahi tha shaayed
uss say mera koi rishtaa bhi nahi tha shayed.

Iftekhar Arif

aur yeh ghazal bhi mujhey pasand aaii thi aur haN agar bura nah maaney to wo shair bhi jo aap ney zia bhaaii kay kalaam per refference kay tour per paish kiya hai

Her samt nazar ja ke palat aati hey heraN
is shehr ko itna kabhi weeraN naheeN dekha
.

mujhe intezaar rahey gaa. ummeed hai kay aap mayoos nahi kareiNge. shukriyah


aapka bhaaii


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PostSubject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN   Sun Dec 16, 2007 3:47 pm

yasmin feroz wrote:
wah! samir sahib
mujhko dukh hai kay aaj kal khud ko
tari nazron say dekhtaa hon mein
bohat khoob
yasmin :


mamnoon e karam


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PostSubject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN   Thu Dec 20, 2007 2:52 am

yasmin feroz wrote:
wah! samir sahib
mujhko dukh hai kay aaj kal khud ko
tari nazron say dekhtaa hon mein
bohat khoob
yasmin :


aadaab.


mamnoon e karam


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PostSubject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN   Sun Jan 13, 2008 6:45 am

Assalam_O_Alikum WR WB

Sir Sameer bhot umda mujhy A to Z bus wah wah hi karta rah gya Smile

FeamnAllah
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PostSubject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN   Fri Jan 18, 2008 4:02 am

waah ji waah!!! Smile

sameer sb deir sey aaney per maazrat, aur dhieroN daad qubool keeje! mujhe bhi haasil e ghazal aakhri she'r bohot pasand aaya! Smile

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PostSubject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN   Sat Jan 19, 2008 5:43 am

Bheegi-Palkain wrote:
Assalam_O_Alikum WR WB

Sir Sameer bhot umda mujhy A to Z bus wah wah hi karta rah gya Smile

FeamnAllah


aadaab.


aapki HoSlaa afzaaii kaa bohat bohat shukriyah. aaindha bhi is Tifl e maktab ko apni aaraa say nawaaztey rahiye gaa.


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PostSubject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN   Sat Jan 19, 2008 5:46 am

Khalid Mahmood wrote:
waah ji waah!!! Smile

sameer sb deir sey aaney per maazrat, aur dhieroN daad qubool keeje! mujhe bhi haasil e ghazal aakhri she'r bohot pasand aaya! Smile

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moHtaram Khalid mahmood SaaHib.
aadaab o salaam e masnoon.


aapkii daad say Khaaksaar ki HoSlaa afzaaii hoti hai, Allah mujhey aap kay dast e shafqat say kabhi mahroom nah karey. Aameen.


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PostSubject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN   Thu Feb 21, 2008 11:43 am

Sameer ,

aik bahut hii aCHh~ii ghazal kahii hay aapnay. vaah!

merii daad haaZir hay

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PostSubject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN   Thu Feb 28, 2008 11:32 pm

sham wrote:
Sameer ,

aik bahut hii aCHh~ii ghazal kahii hay aapnay. vaah!

merii daad haaZir hay

Ehtesham Anwar



moHtaram Ehtishaan SaaHib.
aadaab.

Ghazal kii pasandiidgi kay liye bayHad mamnoon hoN.

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PostSubject: Re: apney saaye say bhi baRa hoN maiN   Thu Oct 01, 2009 9:56 pm

bht achhey sameer!

bht piyari aor bht sundar ghazal kahi hy.
bari saadgi aor bari komalta nazar aai.......jari rakho safar.

wo toh bas yuNhi yaad kartaa hoN
warnah tumko bhula chuka hoN maiN

koan samjhey merey taGhayyur ko
waQt hoN aur aainah hoN maiN


Khair Andaish

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