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Zia Baloch
rukn-e-E'zaazii
Number of posts : 13
Age : 43
Location : Balochistan
Registration date : 2007-10-27
| Subject: :: aek qit'a aur aek she'r ::  Fri Nov 30, 2007 4:49 am | |
| Yaaran-e-suKhan-dostaaN , aadaab !
is KhoobSoorat bazm meiN aa kar mujhe be-intehaa Khushii maHsoos ho rahii hai ! meri du'aa hai k Allah ta'aala is bazm ko faroGh-e-urdu ka baai'c banaade Aaameen ! maiN is bazm ki intezaamiya ko dil ki gihraaiyoN se Mubaarakbaad dete hu'e aek taazah tareen she'r se apnii aamad ka i'laan kartaa hooN , go k is zameen meiN meri Ghazal bhii maujood hai , magar yeh she'r bilkul tar-o-taazah hai ! to mulaaHiza farmaaiye !
maiN hooN a'aashiq to mujhe daar pe laaye kyooN ho?
maiN hooN mujrim to miraa jurm bataayaa jaaye !
aur jaate jaate aek qit'a bhi sunaataa jaao'N to kyaa Harj hai ?
a'rz kiyaa hai :
Gham-zadah shahr kii fazaa kyooN hai ?
zindagii is qadar Khafaa kyooN hai ?
maut Hal to naheeN masaai'l kaa !
aadamii Khud ko maartaa kyooN hai ?
shukriya
Zia Baloch | |
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miim miim mughal
muntaZim-e-a'A'laa
Number of posts : 140
Age : 44
Location : North Nazimabad, Karachi
Registration date : 2007-10-24
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sameer
rukn-e-majlis-e-shooraa
Number of posts : 35
Location : Keamari Karachi
Registration date : 2007-10-30
| | Subject: Re: :: aek qit'a aur aek she'r :: Sun Dec 02, 2007 1:36 am | |
| - Zia Baloch wrote:
- Yaaran-e-suKhan-dostaaN , aadaab !
is KhoobSoorat bazm meiN aa kar mujhe be-intehaa Khushii maHsoos ho rahii hai ! meri du'aa hai k Allah ta'aala is bazm ko faroGh-e-urdu ka baai'c banaade Aaameen ! maiN is bazm ki intezaamiya ko dil ki gihraaiyoN se Mubaarakbaad dete hu'e aek taazah tareen she'r se apnii aamad ka i'laan kartaa hooN , go k is zameen meiN meri Ghazal bhii maujood hai , magar yeh she'r bilkul tar-o-taazah hai ! to mulaaHiza farmaaiye !
maiN hooN a'aashiq to mujhe daar pe laaye kyooN ho?
maiN hooN mujrim to miraa jurm bataayaa jaaye !
aur jaate jaate aek qit'a bhi sunaataa jaao'N to kyaa Harj hai ?
a'rz kiyaa hai :
Gham-zadah shahr kii fazaa kyooN hai ?
zindagii is qadar Khafaa kyooN hai ?
maut Hal to naheeN masaai'l kaa !
aadamii Khud ko maartaa kyooN hai ?
shukriya
Zia Baloch aadaab Zia bhaaiiaapkaa pehlaa shair paRhkar faraz SaaHib kaa shair yaad aagaya.munSif ho agar tum toh kab insaaf karo gay?
Qaatil hoN agar maiN toh saza kyuN nahi detaybaharHaal humesha kii tarhaa Khoob shair aur Khoob Qitaa hai. bharpoor daad HaaZir hai qabool kijiye.aapka bhaaiiSAMEER | |
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waQaar-aHmad-malik
mehmaan
Number of posts : 21
Registration date : 2007-11-08
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Zia Baloch
rukn-e-E'zaazii
Number of posts : 13
Age : 43
Location : Balochistan
Registration date : 2007-10-27
| | Subject: Re: :: aek qit'a aur aek she'r :: Fri Dec 14, 2007 1:46 pm | |
| - miim miim mughal wrote:
- bohat Khoob Ziyaa bhaiaa..
jii khush kardiyaa..
allah kary zor-e-qalam or ziyaaada'h
niyaaz mand
miim miim mughal Mughal bhaa'ii, aadaab ! ma'zirat k taa'Kheer ho ga'ii, aap kii daad se bahut HauSla miltaa hai ! nehaayat mamnoon hooN shukriya Zia Baloch | |
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Zia Baloch
rukn-e-E'zaazii
Number of posts : 13
Age : 43
Location : Balochistan
Registration date : 2007-10-27
| | Subject: Re: :: aek qit'a aur aek she'r :: Fri Dec 14, 2007 1:47 pm | |
| - sameer wrote:
- Zia Baloch wrote:
- Yaaran-e-suKhan-dostaaN , aadaab !
is KhoobSoorat bazm meiN aa kar mujhe be-intehaa Khushii maHsoos ho rahii hai ! meri du'aa hai k Allah ta'aala is bazm ko faroGh-e-urdu ka baai'c banaade Aaameen ! maiN is bazm ki intezaamiya ko dil ki gihraaiyoN se Mubaarakbaad dete hu'e aek taazah tareen she'r se apnii aamad ka i'laan kartaa hooN , go k is zameen meiN meri Ghazal bhii maujood hai , magar yeh she'r bilkul tar-o-taazah hai ! to mulaaHiza farmaaiye !
maiN hooN a'aashiq to mujhe daar pe laaye kyooN ho?
maiN hooN mujrim to miraa jurm bataayaa jaaye !
aur jaate jaate aek qit'a bhi sunaataa jaao'N to kyaa Harj hai ?
a'rz kiyaa hai :
Gham-zadah shahr kii fazaa kyooN hai ?
zindagii is qadar Khafaa kyooN hai ?
maut Hal to naheeN masaai'l kaa !
aadamii Khud ko maartaa kyooN hai ?
shukriya
Zia Baloch
aadaab Zia bhaaii
aapkaa pehlaa shair paRhkar faraz SaaHib kaa shair yaad aagaya.
munSif ho agar tum toh kab insaaf karo gay?
Qaatil hoN agar maiN toh saza kyuN nahi detay
baharHaal humesha kii tarhaa Khoob shair aur Khoob Qitaa hai. bharpoor daad HaaZir hai qabool kijiye.
aapka bhaaii
SAMEER Sameer bhaa'ii, w/salaam aap kii daad se HauSla baRhaa ! nehaayat mamnoon hooN ! shukriy Zia Baloch | |
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Zia Baloch
rukn-e-E'zaazii
Number of posts : 13
Age : 43
Location : Balochistan
Registration date : 2007-10-27
| | Subject: Re: :: aek qit'a aur aek she'r :: Fri Dec 14, 2007 1:51 pm | |
| - waQaar-aHmad-malik wrote:
- Ziaa bh~aa,ii!
Salaam 'arZ hay!
aik baat Hairaan ker ga,ii keh aapnay tuk-bandi dec-2004 maiN Shuruu' kii. meN to samjh~a keh nah-jaanay aap kab say ker rahay haiN. is leHaaz say to aap meray saath~ hi haiN, meN 2004 maiN beHr per research ker raha th~aa. laikin aapkay kalaam ki pukhtagi say aapka Shoq aur lagan Saaf naZ^ar aati hay.
Waqaar bhaa'ii, w/salaam
aap bhii ! maiN to Khair tuk-bandii se aage naheeN baRh sakaa , magar aap ka kalaam to bahut u'mdah hotaa hai ! vaaq'ii shaai'rii Khudaa kii dain hai !
aapka qita^'ah bahut pasand aaYa. aik samaaji pehloo per aapnay soCh viChaar kernay ka moq'ah diYa hay qaari ko, jo aajkal kay dor maiN bahut taizi say baRh~ gaYa hay. meray liYay Yeh beHtareen amal hay jo aik Shaa'ir apnay qalam kay Zaree'ay ker sakta hay, laikin afsos keh aajkal kay bayShtar Shaa'ir rivaaYati Shaa'iri per vaah vaah samaiT per khuSh haiN. daad haaZir hay meri, qubool kee jiyay!.(khat^ lamba ho gaYa, ma'zirat!)
waQaar 
aap ka sochne ka andaaz bhii mujh saa hii hai ! yeh meree Khush-baKhtii hai k aap ko mera qit'a aur she'r donoN pasand aaye ! nehaayat mamnoon hooN ! shukriya
Zia Baloch
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Khalid Mahmood
muntaZim
Number of posts : 81
Age : 73
Location : Mississauga, Canada.
Registration date : 2007-10-26
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