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miim miim mughal
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PostSubject: ~~ chaar Harf / chaar miSr'A'ay ~~   Tue Oct 30, 2007 5:20 pm




~~ chaar Harf / chaar miSr'A'ay ~~

marnay valauN kay katbay likhay jaarahay haiN
dast-e-qaatil kay bausay kiay jaa rhay haiN......

inQilaab aanay vaalaa hay , ay ahl-e-gulshan...
Lahau say taraanay likhay jaa rahay haiN......


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PostSubject: Re: ~~ chaar Harf / chaar miSr'A'ay ~~   Tue Oct 30, 2007 6:14 pm

Muhgal Bhaii
Adaab!

Ye yaqeenan wohi chaar misray haiN jo aap ne sunaaye thay.

Bohat khoob kaha hay aap ne.... lajawaab hay bhaiii..... meri jaanib se daad qabool kijay....

kya puuri ghazal honay ka imkaan hay... ?

Mukhlis,
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PostSubject: Re: ~~ chaar Harf / chaar miSr'A'ay ~~   Tue Oct 30, 2007 6:15 pm

inshaa allah.
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PostSubject: Re: ~~ chaar Harf / chaar miSr'A'ay ~~   Wed Oct 31, 2007 1:20 am

Pyare Mughal

khush raho

sune hue ash'aar paRhe,phir daad qabool karo lekin apni khayal aaraii se Dare huoN ko Daraya na karo agar ham mar gae tau log kaheNge ek shair daad aur bedaad ke darmiyan meiN aakar mahfil se uTh gaya,khuda hameN aur hamare mulk ko salamat rakkhe aur zalimoN se nijaat ata kare aameen.
ek baat aur ,chaar harf ''laa'nat'' ke liye ziyada iste'maal hota hai,
chaar harf bhejna muhaavra hai yani laa'nat bhejna yani nazar andaaz karna aur desh pe marna,aur ........khair jane do.

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PostSubject: Re: ~~ chaar Harf / chaar miSr'A'ay ~~   Wed Oct 31, 2007 10:08 pm

miim miim mughal wrote:



~~ chaar Harf / chaar miSr'A'ay ~~

marnay valauN kay katbay likhay jaarahay haiN
dast-e-qaatil kay bausay kiay jaa rhay haiN......

inQilaab aanay vaalaa hay , ay ahl-e-gulshan...
Lahau say taraanay likhay jaa rahay haiN......


Mad

pyaray bhaii MuGhal
Tasleemaat




yahaN keh logoN ko aik millat bananey keh liye sirf aur sirf inQalaab hi kii zarurat hai. daad HaaZir hai,qabool kijiye aur shukriyah ka moQa dijiye.


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PostSubject: Re: ~~ chaar Harf / chaar miSr'A'ay ~~   Thu Nov 01, 2007 12:48 am

mmm sb kaash k maiN bhi aapki zabaani aapka kalaam sun sakta Smile bahar haal ho sakta hai k aap ne is bezm meiN aisa koii intezaam ker rakha ho. ager aisa hai to kuch ata pata btaiiye!
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PostSubject: Re: ~~ chaar Harf / chaar miSr'A'ay ~~   Thu Nov 15, 2007 5:56 pm

bohat khub janab
bohat achy mesry lekh hai aap ny
boaht khub aap ki aur poetry ka intazar rahy ga
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PostSubject: Re: ~~ chaar Harf / chaar miSr'A'ay ~~   Fri Nov 30, 2007 5:08 am

vaah MuGhal vaah ! mazaa aagayaa !

mujhe hamesha se shaai'ree meiN yeh andaaz marGhoob rahaa hai ! aap ne to meri chaaNdnii karaadii ! bahut hii Khoob ! ab jaldii se Ghazal mukammal kejiye ! aur hameN sunaaiye ! ham muntazir haiN ! ziyaada intezaar maut ke mutaraadif hai ! Khayaal rakhiye gaa ! be-shumaar daad qabool farmaaiye ! shukriya

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PostSubject: Re: ~~ chaar Harf / chaar miSr'A'ay ~~   Fri Dec 14, 2007 4:15 pm

Mughal Bhai

aap ka kalam watan ke her samajh dar shakhs ke dil ki awaz hey. Lekin wahan tow haal wohi hey na ke:

ab hey baari bisaartoN ki qamar
Kho chukey log tow zubaN kab ke

Aur kisi qaum ki sab sey baree bad naseebi wo hoti hey jab wahan ke danish war apni awaz aur tehreer sey mehroom ho jaaen ya ker diye jaaen .

Umeed hey jald hi aap is ghazal ki takmeel fermaaen gey. isi andaz ka mera ek sher berdasht ki jiye:

GaliyoN mein guunjti hey talabgar ki sada
azad ho gayee hey griftar ki sada

kabhi moqa mila tow puui ghazal bhi suniye ga.

Bohat si daad

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